Wednesday 22nd November
Feedback for our group presentation was uploaded to blackboard on this day. We were able to see what grade we scored (I scored a 68/100) and we were also able to see the breakdown of the grading and we were left with some comments on how we could improve. In the feedback it says that our piece seems like two rather than one.
“However, your concept feels like two pieces rather than one. You have the mindfulness piece, then you have the sound effects/Foley/processed piece.”
Using this feedback, as a group, we were able to talk about the exact route we wanted to take our project.
-Joseph Cooper